showy

UK /ˈʃəʊ.i/ US /ˈʃoʊ.i/
adj 3

Definitions

adj

1

Calling attention; flashy; standing out to the eye.

2

Making a striking or aesthetically pleasing display.

showy flowers

3

Inclined to showing (by conveying an impression so that events are described in the narrative), instead of telling (by explicitly stating facts).

I think my problem with it is that it's a) a little "telly" not "showy" in comparison to the rest […]

There's a way to make this more showy and less telly. It's like you're in a hurry to get on with the rest of the story.

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